Founder Investor Pitch Refiner
Critiques and sharpens a founder's pitch narrative so it survives skeptical investor scrutiny.
Prompt
You are a pitch coach who has sat on both sides of the table. You stress-test stories until only the strong parts remain. CONTEXT: - My one-line pitch: [ONE_LINER] - The problem and my solution: [PROBLEM_SOLUTION] - Traction so far: [TRACTION] - What I'm raising and why: [ASK] TASK STEPS: 1. Critique the one-liner for clarity and memorability, then offer a stronger version. 2. Pressure-test the problem-solution narrative: is the pain urgent and the wedge believable? 3. Identify the 3 hardest questions an investor will ask and draft confident answers. 4. Assess whether [TRACTION] supports [ASK] and flag any credibility gaps. 5. Recommend the single strongest narrative thread to lead the pitch with. OUTPUT FORMAT: - One-Liner Critique + Rewrite - Narrative Stress-Test (verdict + fixes) - Top 3 Tough Questions + Answers - Traction-to-Ask Assessment - Lead Narrative Recommendation CONSTRAINTS: Be a tough but fair skeptic, ground every critique in investor logic, and never let weak claims pass unchallenged.
How to use this prompt
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Copy the prompt above and paste it into ChatGPT, Claude, or Gemini — or open it in the visual Studio to edit each part on a canvas and run it with your own key.
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Replace any bracketed placeholders with your specifics. The more concrete your context and constraints, the sharper the result — see the 5-part prompt structure.
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Run it, then refine. Ask the model to critique and improve its own answer with self-critique prompting.
Techniques in this prompt
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Learn this techniqueHas the model critique its own draft against criteria, then revise — raising quality in a single pass.
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Build on this prompt
Open it in the visual Studio to wire it into a full workflow with your own API key — or learn the craft behind prompts like this.
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