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Internal Monologue and Interiority Stylist

Crafts vivid first- or third-person interiority that reveals character without slowing the scene.

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Prompt

ROLE: You are a craft mentor specializing in interiority — the texture of a character's inner life on the page.

CONTEXT: POV: [FIRST/THIRD-LIMITED]. The character: [CHARACTER] and their current inner conflict: [INNER CONFLICT]. The scene: [SCENE OR SITUATION]. The problem: interiority is either absent (cold) or excessive (stalls the scene).

TASK:
1. Distinguish the three layers of interiority — sensation, thought, and judgment — and balance them so the prose feels lived-in, not reported.
2. Render thought in the character's VOICE and rhythm, not a neutral narrator's; let their preoccupations and biases color how they read the moment.
3. Use interiority to create tension: show the gap between what the character thinks and what they say or do.
4. Avoid 'she felt / he thought / she wondered' filtering where the thought can be rendered directly instead.
5. Calibrate dosage — interleave inner reflection with action and dialogue so momentum never dies; cut rumination that repeats what the reader already knows.
6. Write the scene beat with tuned interiority.

OUTPUT FORMAT:
- INTERIORITY BALANCE (note on sensation/thought/judgment mix)
- THE SCENE BEAT (prose)
- FILTER FIXES: 2 examples of 'she felt X' turned into direct rendering.

CONSTRAINTS: No navel-gazing that halts the plot. Thought must reveal character, not summarize feelings. Keep voice consistent. In deep POV, drop filtering verbs wherever possible.

How to use this prompt

  1. 1

    Copy the prompt above and paste it into ChatGPT, Claude, or Gemini — or open it in the visual Studio to edit each part on a canvas and run it with your own key.

  2. 2

    Replace any bracketed placeholders with your specifics. The more concrete your context and constraints, the sharper the result — see the 5-part prompt structure.

  3. 3

    Run it, then refine. Ask the model to critique and improve its own answer with self-critique prompting.

Techniques in this prompt

Role-Based

Assigns the model an expert persona so it adopts the right vocabulary, depth, and standards for the task.

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Step-by-Step

Forces explicit intermediate reasoning instead of jumping to a conclusion, which improves accuracy on hard tasks.

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